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Lovekus to cuddle to.

1.
Two arms
Three little lines
One ku

2.
Your body embracing mine
Two halves of one
rejoin, rejoice

3.
Ku'ing in the evening
I think of your tiny smile
Cooing near my ear

4.
Sky darkens from peach to plum
Inside I embrace
your flushing

5.
Blankets or your arm-
Warmth
one way or another

6.
Waking up in the morning
brushing teeth
before a kiss

7.
Hair can wait--
Brushing what is bare
takes priority

8.
I ku for you submitting--
one ku for a bended knee
one coo for needing

9.
Baby, nobody ku's
the way I ku for you
so indiscreetly
Jorge - sorry they are not 5/7/5. ;)

What is a loveku? It's that thing I just made up, because I could. WHAT WHAT!? (As usual, some more silly than others)


Whore-ku1.
Off of the knees
her skirt
lifts
2.
Playing hide the staff,
I realize my three children
have been watching
3.
In the red light's sphere,
a woman plies
her acrobatics
4.
Soiled doves coo
At falling dusk
5.
The novice plow--
What salt is this
planted at her hip?
6.
Folded knees--
How expensive
Their unfolding
7.
April's surprise
Added more clink
To her pocket
8.
Reflected upsidedown
in the suspended mirror, his promise
points to infinity
9.
The old man
aims crookedly
approaching his trade
Horror-ku1.
Grave business--
The man dies,
A zombie rises
2.
This neighborhood
Is really up and coming
3.
"I was sucked in!"
"Oh, B positive,"
Chided A.
4.
A real heart-breaker,
He's never late
For a stake
5.
Dueting groans-
Tree limbs in the wind,
Dead limbs in a breeze
6.
Ultimately, the account
Pays for his errors;
One shotgun, two shells
Three remains, remaining
7.
Tonight the stakes are high,
Bloody,
Baring heads
8.
Tokyo sacked:
"That made my blood run cold!"
"Well, get under the sun, 'Zillie"
9.
His love token on the table,
She said: You really are good
At giving head.
SciFaiku1.
Red Planet blue:
datavised memories
before water mining

2.
two moons crest, dueting--
beneath, four hearts
beat as one

3.
fist in the air before the explosion
you sunk my spaceship!

4.
breaking news: holes
no longer just for worms

5.
Arvnark in small moon snarls
like proud Arvnark-
shows full sets of teeth

6.
Yo mama so ugly
she's got no tentacles

7.
new earth
fresh terraforming
same party animals:
elephant, donkey
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will have you know I wrote a a "Chore-Ku" a few weeks ago. This is how you inspire me.
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vespera Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle: oh I am looking forward to seeing this in your glory be when we exchange ;)
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, man. My Glory Be stuff is in several different notebooks and I haven't updated the computer document since July. FML. :o
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vespera Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've NEVER updated a computer version. I'm just going to scan them, I think. See if I can make it like a google dox or something that I can have up in a cloud and link people to? I dunno. That's the theory. I may shoot myself later.

My Glory Be is all in one journal, but during vacation, I had about 5 napkins I'd written my glory be on that were dated that I had to go back and put in LOL
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I started in one notebook, and then misplaced it and ended up writing in another (halfway through, mind you, not the beginning) and some are in journals, and ack.
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vespera Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well that was silly ;)
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup. Oh well. Next year, I will have a dedicated Glory Be notebook. :D
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: especially 4 :)
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synconi Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013   Artisan Crafter
These make me smile! 3 is absolutely adorable and 4 is yummy- I like how the colours can apply just everywhere in that particular loveku ;)
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vespera Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love: thank you!
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