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My Coyote. Kate has a book coming out from Unbound Content sometime later in 2013, but until then, you can buy Hallucinations, Cancer and the Purple Tree: [link]

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Mother When I Die


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Mother,
when I die
where will my bones go?

Will the ground pick them clean as teeth,
every socket a dried out gum,
an empty bullet shell
caged in the earth
like an unloved dog;

Is there somewhere in my womb a child
who, like a smith, will melt me down
let my skin escape into the air
in a pungent second death,
then, as I'm a firefly,
trap me in a jar and hold her hands to her mouth
as a kiss
or a sob
or a Mommy, look how close we've become;

Or will it be just a lover or my brother who will say
soon there will be no one left to visit her,
break her down, spread her out
a final dance

ashes in the wind.







Big pet peeve of mine: a poet/writer you like and are informed about is used in another poet/writer's work - but something is said about him/her that is blatantly not true (it's obvious that the person was just using the name to use it). Annoying? 

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23 deviants said YES YES YES. I would be so annoyed if somewhere along the line someone used my name just for the sake of using my name and attached false information to it.
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15 deviants said It bothers me, but there are bigger fish to fry.
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5 deviants said Who cares? I'm well informed enough to spot the blatant error; it's up to everyone else to fact check on their own.
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5 deviants said If anything, I find this entertaining. Stupid is as stupid does.

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Just ran on real quick to say I haven't been on and probably won't for a while.

:heart: be well

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Raquel
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
Aruba
Personal Quote: We prepare youth for love at an impressionable age.

Raquel's Must Reads
Anne Sexton - To Bedlam and Part Way Back
Pablo Neruda - The Captain's Verses
Ted Hughes - Crow
The Outlaw Bible of American Poetry

Vespera's dA Bookshelf
:iconjade-pandora:'s Shooting Star: [link]
:iconbark:'s Barking at Random: [link]
:iconqueenhrosie:'s Expletive Deleted: [link]
:iconsunshinegypsy:'s Hallucinations, Cancer and the Purple Tree: [link]
& Escape Artist: [link]
:iconsunshinegypsy: & :iconschriftsteller:'s As We Are Now, But Never Again: [link]

Publication Credits
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:iconzygoteinmycoffee-plz: :iconsurrealgrotesque-plz: :iconyourdailypoem-plz: :iconbongisbard-plz: :iconthelegendary-plz:
:iconbrevitypoetry-plz: :iconmidwestquarterly-plz: :iconscifaiku-plz:

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:heart: :heart: :heart: The Review Project MarchThe Review Project, Competition... Thing
KathrynOdriscoll Post | CR Literature Post
On month one of The Review Project 143 reviews were left for other writers. So I decided to make this a recurring project. There are two important changes though.
1) You can now review anyone, not just writers.
2) The prizes. See below.
Your Mission (should you choose to accept it):
Is to go to the profile of an artist that you like on DeviantART and leave them a review. Not on a specific deviation but about them as an artist.
Definition "Review": A formal assessment or examination of something." - Like a movie review or a theatre review. They are usually used to express positive things, and that's what I mean by reviews in this instance. "Critical Reviews" are not what this project is a
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Raquel has been on my watch list since almost my first day on deviantArt. Her poetry moves me in a sensual, visceral way, the likes of which one rarely comes across. The direct way she deals with the issues some poets attempt to talk around lends an honesty to her poetry, and leaves us readers wanting more!! Check out her gallery!
*travelgirlxx

Raquel, as a poet, is as she is as a woman: forward and unapologetic. Her words leave a taste in your mouth, whether it be of her, of a country, or of something you'd like to be repulsed by, but can't deny being infatuated with. She will have you remember her, or how she has taken in a sight. She will eye your semi-colons, licking her lips, enamored with your punctuation, unless she’s unimpressed - in which case, she’ll show her teeth before tearing into the meat of your composition. She is no Feminist Tim, in terms of editing. No, she would make Feminist Tim her bitch and belt him with his own line breaks showing as much restraint as she would if given a foreign man (or a southern woman?) for a night. All the while, Tim or whoever is receiving her undeniable suggestions, will quiver with delight. `FuzzyHoser *this review has been edited by `vespera

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`FuzzyHoser 22 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
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Hullo! Thanks x a million for the adorable card - I'm feeling very guilty for not having not said so sooner (and taking my sweet time replying in full to yourself and Hoser).

Will get back to you guys soon, hope you're doing great.
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Thanks for the llama!!! :D
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Thank you for the :iconllama3dplz:

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*Diluculi May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much for the :+devwatch: :)
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~RedShuttleworthPoet May 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
Write onward!
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~Flummoxative May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so so much for the watch. :heart:
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`vespera May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are super welcome :heart: I've been meaning to watch you
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~Flummoxative May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Hope I don't disappoint, then.
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